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06 Nov 2007, 4:19 pm / Lonely

I wish I could wipe
your falling tears away,
as you bravely smile through your pain...
You see me suffer,
then you break down and cry
miles apart...
In your dreams
I softly kiss you,
no one can see the pain,
that we both feel inside
miles apart...
You whisper I love you
and I whisper to the skies,
I love you too
When will this pain ever go away
even though we are
miles apart...
To be by your side
is a dream I can't deny
But I will wish for it to come true.
I miss you so badly
my heart is breaking
as we cry
miles apart...



My Comments

07 Nov 2007, 5:39 am
tsenpay said :

 

  ya!

    your poem realy touch my emotion, how desparately your are missing your only angle who live miles away under others shelter. Are u raely miss her? if yes, y u look forword  for  someone form this college and repeatedly rejected.Be content with what u have,i know everybody is poet when  he is in touch of love.  

 



06 Nov 2007, 10:36 pm
semantha said :

huh dude nice work.

really touchin i knw how much missin s/one we love feels but if u trust each other thn ur dreams will surelly come tru.

nwys u tc n cheers.






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